[kingrapshop]

Originally Posted by ayrnl

Equally importaintly, though, travelling to ......

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[may4phuong]

Đang học ielts, búc mát để sau này post bài

[trunghq]

Originally Posted by ayrnl

It is an undeniable fact that the development of the airplanes has revolutionized the way we travel, as evidenced by the past 50 years have seen a dramatic increase in global tourism. Some people suppose that it have many advantages, but others consider that it have leave significant disadvantages. I personally believe that the benefits of international tourism far outweight its drawbacks. There are two primary reasons for this.
First of all, nowadays, more and more peoples select global tourism rather than choosing domestic tourism, it has brought vast benefits for economic growth to many nations. Tourism is a influential source of income for many countries through the consumption of goods and tourism services. Governments are often taxed on travel companies, airlines, transportation services and so on. Similarly, tourism activities create employment opportunities in the services relevant to tourism. Some of services provided by the accommodation service such as home stay, hotels, motels, resorts, food services such as stores, restaurants, bars, transportation services such as taxis, boat, and amusement parks. More service will create more jobs, it helps improve life for local peoples.
Equally importaintly, though, travelling to another country can give tourists a chance to understand others culture. Admittedly, when they are exposed to local peoples it would give them a deeper understanding about the place which is hard to get from books or television. Also, tourists can relax and have fun by exploring international destinations. For example, in many newspapers, online websites mention tourists visited Hoi An Ancient Town felt it a quaint place and local peoples are friendly, honest.
By way of conclusion, I once again reaffirm my position that global tourism has had a positive impact on modern life. Society is increasingly modern and developing, so I believe that global tourism will continue to become more popular as the pace of life increase.
Bài này cho bác chấm thì bác chấm đc tầm bao nhiêu

1. Thím phải cho đề.
2. Lỗi quá nhiều.
3. Ý chưa rõ ràng, liên kết kém.

[zitkolong]

Originally Posted by ayrnl

It is an undeniable fact that the development of the airplanes has revolutionized the way we travel, as evidenced by the past 50 years have seen a dramatic increase in global tourism. Some people suppose that it have many advantages, but others consider that it have leave significant disadvantages. I personally believe that the benefits of international tourism far outweight its drawbacks. There are two primary reasons for this.
First of all, nowadays, more and more peoples select global tourism rather than choosing domestic tourism, it has brought vast benefits for economic growth to many nations. Tourism is a influential source of income for many countries through the consumption of goods and tourism services. Governments are often taxed on travel companies, airlines, transportation services and so on. Similarly, tourism activities create employment opportunities in the services relevant to tourism. Some of services provided by the accommodation service such as home stay, hotels, motels, resorts, food services such as stores, restaurants, bars, transportation services such as taxis, boat, and amusement parks. More service will create more jobs, it helps improve life for local peoples.
Equally importaintly, though, travelling to another country can give tourists a chance to understand others culture. Admittedly, when they are exposed to local peoples it would give them a deeper understanding about the place which is hard to get from books or television. Also, tourists can relax and have fun by exploring international destinations. For example, in many newspapers, online websites mention tourists visited Hoi An Ancient Town felt it a quaint place and local peoples are friendly, honest.
By way of conclusion, I once again reaffirm my position that global tourism has had a positive impact on modern life. Society is increasingly modern and developing, so I believe that global tourism will continue to become more popular as the pace of life increase.
Bài này cho bác chấm thì bác chấm đc tầm bao nhiêu

thím này viết mình đọc còn thấy chán nữa, vốn từ vựng lặp lại quá nhiều, mấy cái từ thêm vào nhiều quá hóa loãng

[trunghq]

Originally Posted by zitkolong

thím này viết mình đọc còn thấy chán nữa, vốn từ vựng lặp lại quá nhiều, mấy cái từ thêm vào nhiều quá hóa loãng

Thím này kiểu đang 5.5 non. Cái này mình gặp hoài. Những người kẹt ở mức này có mấy đặc điểm dư lày:
1. Ngữ pháp Cơ bản vẫn mắc. Cái tội she have là tội cực to, có thể đôi khi là a/ an/ the tùm lum nữa.
2. Bắt đầu dùng nhiều cụm từ cao siêu hơn hoặc từ đắt hơn nhưng không bảo đảm được cấu trúc SVO cơ bản.
3. Gần như chưa có khái niệm hoặc có học nhưng chưa lĩnh hội được thế nào là Coherence và Cohesion (25% điểm).

Tí mình ngồi sửa cụ thể cho các thím xem.

[trunghq]

Originally Posted by may4phuong

Đang học ielts, búc mát để sau này post bài

Gửi qua gmail theo cặp 1 + 2 nhé, không phải post.

[trunghq]

Originally Posted by ayrnl

It is an undeniable fact that the development of the airplanes has revolutionized the way we travel, as evidenced by the past 50 years have seen a dramatic increase in global tourism. Some people suppose that it have many advantages, but others consider that it have leave significant disadvantages. I personally believe that the benefits of international tourism far outweight its drawbacks. There are two primary reasons for this.
First of all, nowadays, more and more peoples select global tourism rather than choosing domestic tourism, it has brought vast benefits for economic growth to many nations. Tourism is a influential source of income for many countries through the consumption of goods and tourism services. Governments are often taxed on travel companies, airlines, transportation services and so on. Similarly, tourism activities create employment opportunities in the services relevant to tourism. Some of services provided by the accommodation service such as home stay, hotels, motels, resorts, food services such as stores, restaurants, bars, transportation services such as taxis, boat, and amusement parks. More service will create more jobs, it helps improve life for local peoples.
Equally importaintly, though, travelling to another country can give tourists a chance to understand others culture. Admittedly, when they are exposed to local peoples it would give them a deeper understanding about the place which is hard to get from books or television. Also, tourists can relax and have fun by exploring international destinations. For example, in many newspapers, online websites mention tourists visited Hoi An Ancient Town felt it a quaint place and local peoples are friendly, honest.
By way of conclusion, I once again reaffirm my position that global tourism has had a positive impact on modern life. Society is increasingly modern and developing, so I believe that global tourism will continue to become more popular as the pace of life increase.
Bài này cho bác chấm thì bác chấm đc tầm bao nhiêu

Ném cái đề cho mình để mình viết bài sửa.

[ayrnl]

Originally Posted by trunghq

Ném cái đề cho mình để mình viết bài sửa.

International tourism is now more common than ever before. Some feel that this is a positive trend, while others do not.
What are you opinions on this?
Mình mới luyện ielts thôi thím
1 tháng nữa thi mà chỉ mong tầm 5.0 là mừng r
Mong bác chỉ giáo, mỗi ngày mình sẽ dành >5 tiếng để ôn luyện Ielts, ko biết 1 tháng nữa có ra ngô ra khoai gì ko

[trunghq]

Mới up cái web, các thím xem thử:

https://giaolangtrunghq.wordpress.com/choi-game/

[trunghq]

Originally Posted by ayrnl

International tourism is now more common than ever before. Some feel that this is a positive trend, while others do not.
What are you opinions on this?
Mình mới luyện ielts thôi thím
1 tháng nữa thi mà chỉ mong tầm 5.0 là mừng r
Mong bác chỉ giáo, mỗi ngày mình sẽ dành >5 tiếng để ôn luyện Ielts, ko biết 1 tháng nữa có ra ngô ra khoai gì ko

Lên Simon học cách viết đơn giản hơn đi, sao cho đặt bút cái là viết được chứ không phải cao siêu như trong bài dưới đâu.

Hoặc lên trang của mình xem mình chém gió.

https://giaolangtrunghq.wordpress.co...-viet-opinion/