[trunghq]

Originally Posted by mapsmile9x

Các bác giúp em với paraphrase ạ: The graphs below give information about computer ownership as a percentage of the population between 2002 and 2010, and by level of education for the years 2002 and 2010.

give = show/ illustrate/ highlight/... được hết
information on = data about/ changes of (nếu phù hợp)

between 2002 and 2010 = over the 8-year period from ... to ...

the years 2002 and 2010 = in the two years of ... and .../ in ... and ...

computer ownership

as a percentage of the population = by comparisons of total population and education level

The graphs show data on computer ownership by comparisons of total population and education level in 2002 and 2010.

[mapsmile9x]

Originally Posted by trunghq

give = show/ illustrate/ highlight/... được hết
information on = data about/ changes of (nếu phù hợp)

between 2002 and 2010 = over the 8-year period from ... to ...

the years 2002 and 2010 = in the two years of ... and .../ in ... and ...

computer ownership

as a percentage of the population = by making comparisons with the total population and by education levels

Em cám ơn nhiều lắm ạ

[killyou]

Nhận sửa writing non-ielts không thím ơi? Mình viết tầm 500-1000 words, chỉ để practice thôi

[trunghq]

Originally Posted by killyou

Nhận sửa writing non-ielts không thím ơi? Mình viết tầm 500-1000 words, chỉ để practice thôi

Nhận IELTS thôi thím! Mà tới tận 1,000 sửa mệt lắm!

[Chisanausagi]

Originally Posted by killyou

Nhận sửa writing non-ielts không thím ơi? Mình viết tầm 500-1000 words, chỉ để practice thôi

1000 thì qua đây e sửa cho

[trunghq]

Originally Posted by mapsmile9x

Em cám ơn nhiều lắm ạ

Vừa sửa lại. Thím xem thử.

[little_suv]

Task 1 tính ra line chart vẫn dễ nhất nhỉ , mấy cái diagram rồi dạng mix, hình ảnh này nọ nhìn oải quá

Thím có sửa task 2 hem ??

[trunghq]

Originally Posted by little_suv

Task 1 tính ra line chart vẫn dễ nhất nhỉ , mấy cái diagram rồi dạng mix, hình ảnh này nọ nhìn oải quá

Thím có sửa task 2 hem ??

Mixed mình thấy dễ hơn vì cơ bản khi miêu tả chỉ cần điểm nhấn thôi. Thằng nào càng đơn giản càng khó viết.

Mình chữa theo cặp Task 1 + Task 2 mà thím.

[trunghq]

Lên đi cu em.

[ayrnl]

It is an undeniable fact that the development of the airplanes has revolutionized the way we travel, as evidenced by the past 50 years have seen a dramatic increase in global tourism. Some people suppose that it have many advantages, but others consider that it have leave significant disadvantages. I personally believe that the benefits of international tourism far outweight its drawbacks. There are two primary reasons for this.
First of all, nowadays, more and more peoples select global tourism rather than choosing domestic tourism, it has brought vast benefits for economic growth to many nations. Tourism is a influential source of income for many countries through the consumption of goods and tourism services. Governments are often taxed on travel companies, airlines, transportation services and so on. Similarly, tourism activities create employment opportunities in the services relevant to tourism. Some of services provided by the accommodation service such as home stay, hotels, motels, resorts, food services such as stores, restaurants, bars, transportation services such as taxis, boat, and amusement parks. More service will create more jobs, it helps improve life for local peoples.
Equally importaintly, though, travelling to another country can give tourists a chance to understand others culture. Admittedly, when they are exposed to local peoples it would give them a deeper understanding about the place which is hard to get from books or television. Also, tourists can relax and have fun by exploring international destinations. For example, in many newspapers, online websites mention tourists visited Hoi An Ancient Town felt it a quaint place and local peoples are friendly, honest.
By way of conclusion, I once again reaffirm my position that global tourism has had a positive impact on modern life. Society is increasingly modern and developing, so I believe that global tourism will continue to become more popular as the pace of life increase.
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