[trumbantia2012]

too tired today

[hiroki]

I can’t say anything with you,
I just see you go away,
but I always think: "You're my destiny"

help fix grammar for me, plz

[Alf111]

Hello, everyone. I log out. Bye

[philu28]

Originally Posted by hiroki

help fix grammar for me, plz

What's wrong with the grammar?

[hiroki]

Originally Posted by philu28

What's wrong with the grammar?

i think it's wrong

[kiyeusu]

Originally Posted by hiroki

help fix grammar for me, plz

I think its "say anything to you"

[gunner2801]

Originally Posted by hiroki

help fix grammar for me, plz

I can't say anything to you -> I think ' I can't speak a word' is better.
Just watch you go away.
But I always think ' You're my destiny'.

[gunner2801]

Originally Posted by hiroki

i think it's wrong

It's 'Incorrect', not 'wrong'.

[gunner2801]

Listening Westlife's 'Soledad' over and over.
Feeling freedoom now.
Hey dudes, build this box more interesting everyday. I want to go back to studying E.
F17 is so boring these days.

[blackbuddha]

Originally Posted by hiroki

help fix grammar for me, plz

Here I am helplessly and silently parting with you. But in my heart, I've never stopped thinking you're my destiny.

Here I am helplessly putting on a smile and silently parting with you while holding myself as hard as possible from crying my heart out to you, "my destiny".

What say you? A touch of drama?