[trunghq]

Topic:
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Many people believe that high levels in violence in films today are causing serious social problems.

What are these problems and how could they be reduced?

You should use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.

Write at least 250 words.

Answer:
It is strongly believed that deleterious effects from televised brutality have been affecting a considerable number of individuals in society. There are plentiful reasons for this social trend, but measures could be taken to tackle the vital issue.

No matter in the media effects arena has received as much attention as violence so far. Firstly, cruel and unpleasant scenes undoubtedly leave a negatively lasting impression on young viewers which later leads to violent behaviors due to the vulnerability of their age. There has been a period when adolescents’ developing personalities are unconsciously affected by both either negative or positive subjects. Indeed, it is predictable that children are capable of imitating simple behaviors displayed on television and surroundings. Another cause is that repeated exposure to television violence poses risks for those who suffer from stress-related conditions. There has been a tendency that those obsessed effortlessly with aggressive contents might turn to crime and gangs. Unavailable jobs and lack of education might contribute greatly to this factual situation as well.

Provided that governments and social groups coordinated intentionally, there would always be efficient solutions. To begin with, there should be fundamental activities to enhance communication skills within residential communities in order to pull film-addicts out and help them develop encouraging attitudes towards life. A second action could be a combination of censorship of violent scenes and raising age restriction which could be implemented a strict law put on mass media. Finally, some parental control system should be applied in entire entertainment devices. Reports could be sent directly to a school council and parents cooperatively.

In conclusion, societies can take steps to mitigate these problems by demanding a ban on violent movies while acts from families and school should be encouraged as well.

[trunghq]

Topic:
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

In some countries, online shopping is replacing shopping in stores.

Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

You should use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.

Write at least 250 words.



Answer:
It is widely accepted that there has been a considerable shift from traditional stores to online retailers in the modern days. Personally, I strongly believe that this rising trend brings both advantages and disadvantages.

On the one hand, there are strong arguments in favor of shopping via the Internet. First of all, purchasing long-distance definitely saves time and travelling costs for consumers, especially those who live on the undeveloped outskirts. Free charges for shipping, express delivery policies and points earned for accounts registered are convincing benefits in comparison with those of physical stores. Another advantage is that while placing a wire order, Internet users have a variety of options based on profound product descriptions and rankings. In other words, this enables customers to make wise decisions in the first place.

On the other hand, I would argue that negative impacts should not be ignored. To begin with, it is obvious that most shoppers tend to pay money for items sight unseen. Therefore, a clothing product that is unfit would be inevitable and a payment for returning should be added to the limited budget of regular customers. A second drawback is from deceptive advertising which increasingly becomes popular in the competitive era. For example, a sports company might state that their newly manufactured shoes help wearers burn calories whilst there has been no mention of which research institute responsible for such misleading information. However, until there appears a report revealing the truth, web retailers undoubtedly gain numerous profits.

For the reasons mentioned above, it seems to me that shopping online would unquestionably come with pros and cons, however, this should be the most appropriate form of shopping in the years to come.

[trunghq]

Originally Posted by sunfure

Ngoài lề 1 tí bạn chủ thớt có thể chia sẻ cho mình kinh nghiệm học writing được không ?
Muốn học để viết cho rành mạch, hoặc ít ra là diễn tả được những điều mình nghĩ nhưng chỉ đọc sách báo, truyện thôi thì chưa đủ thì phải.
Tks trước nhé ^^.

Học hết thầy này cô kia. Hết sách tây sách ta sẽ giỏi. Thím hỏi 1 câu mà mình buồn. Mình xác định học cả đời.

Mới học viết kiểu mới học.
Học đại học viết kiểu học đại học.
Cao học viết kiểu cao học.
Tiến sĩ văn vẻ kiểu tiến sĩ.

[trunghq]

Originally Posted by ltcon

1. Talk about a great person who has devoted his or her life to your country.
hộ em với thím

Gõ Learning History through Past Simple gì đó có rất nhiều bài hay. Lôi về đổi tên nhân vật.

[trunghq]

Ai cần chữa gửi bài gấp. Em đang làm 2 bài/ ngày.

[ltcon]

2. what are your long term and short term goals?
3. How do you deal with adversity in your life?
4. What do you think about donation?
5. Talk about your strengths and weakensses.
6. Talk about the ways to manage stress and handle anger.
7. Do you believe in superstitions? Why?
8. Talk about some helpful tips when going travel
9. Compare two cities in your country
10. Talk about the way to produce your best work.
11. Talk about the benefit of laughter
12. Talk about the importance of technology in your life
13. Discuss ways to protect the environment
14. What do you think about the cultural impact of foreign imports.
15. Talk about the role of English in international communication.
giúp em với các thím

[trunghq]

Originally Posted by ltcon

2. what are your long term and short term goals?
3. How do you deal with adversity in your life?
4. What do you think about donation?
5. Talk about your strengths and weakensses.
6. Talk about the ways to manage stress and handle anger.
7. Do you believe in superstitions? Why?
8. Talk about some helpful tips when going travel
9. Compare two cities in your country
10. Talk about the way to produce your best work.
11. Talk about the benefit of laughter
12. Talk about the importance of technology in your life
13. Discuss ways to protect the environment
14. What do you think about the cultural impact of foreign imports.
15. Talk about the role of English in international communication.
giúp em với các thím

Thím viết ra đi mình góp ý cho.

[duy1124]

Originally Posted by trunghq

Topic:
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

In some countries, online shopping is replacing shopping in stores.

Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

You should use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.

Write at least 250 words.



Answer:
It is widely accepted that there has been a considerable shift from traditional stores to online retailers in the modern days. Personally, I strongly believe that this rising trend brings both advantages and disadvantages.

On the one hand, there are strong arguments in favor of shopping via the Internet. First of all, purchasing long-distance definitely saves time and travelling costs for consumers, especially those who live on the undeveloped outskirts. Free charges for shipping, express delivery policies and points earned for accounts registered are convincing benefits in comparison with those of physical stores. Another advantage is that while placing a wire order, Internet users have a variety of options based on profound product descriptions and rankings. In other words, this enables customers to make wise decisions in the first place.

On the other hand, I would argue that negative impacts should not be ignored. To begin with, it is obvious that most of shoppers tend to pay money for items sight unseen. Therefore, a clothing product that is unfit would be inevitable and a payment for returning should be added to the limited budget of regular customers. A second drawback is from deceptive advertising which increasingly becomes popular in the competitive era. For example, a sports company might state that their newly manufactured shoes help wearers burn calories whilst there has been no mention of which research institute responsible for such misleading information. However, until there appears a report revealing the truth, web retailers undoubtedly gain numerous profits.

For the reasons mentioned above, it seems to me that shopping online would unquestionably come with pros and cons, however, this should be the most appropriate form of shopping in the years to come.

Hình như hơi kì kì về mặt logic
Have to hay hơn là tend to chứ nhỉ?

[ltcon]

Originally Posted by trunghq

Thím viết ra đi mình góp ý cho.

thím gợi ý cho mình được không
dạng keyword ấy

[trunghq]

Originally Posted by duy1124

Hình như hơi kì kì về mặt logic
Have to hay hơn là tend to chứ nhỉ?

tend to = intentionally

Mình đặc biệt không dùng must/ have to, nếu có thì dùng should/ would.