[anhtu214]

Originally Posted by dhl001

Mình vừa tham gia 1 bài test, phía công ty gửi mail cho mình báo mình đã qua được vòng 1 và chuẩn bị tới vòng phỏng vấn. Yêu cầu mình gửi mail xác nhận rằng mình sẽ đi phỏng vấn.

Mình muốn trả lời rằng "tôi rất cám ơn anh đã thông báo cho tôi và tôi sẽ tham dự cuộc phỏng vấn đó".

mình viết thế này không biết đúng hay không
This email is to confirm I will be attending the interview.
Thank you for your....! (chỗ này không biết điền từ gì vào

các thím giúp em nhé

Thank you for your information and I will attend the interview

[aclong154]

Originally Posted by Addmin

Help those most in need dịch ra là gì thế anh em

Thấy để ở dưới gần chỗ post bài nên hỏi

Giúp những ai cần giúp đỡ

P/s: cho em hỏi bài kiểm tra SLEP gì gì đó có quan trọng ko với điểm bao nhiêu thuộc dạng cao vì hồi chiều em thi thấy dễ quá đạt 62/67

[Jay]

Originally Posted by anhtu214

Hi guys, I'm going to make an IELTS test in next 2 months. I'm not sure that I can handle the writing part. So, would you mind sharing with me some website which helps students fix essay? I really need it.

By the way, I want to ask you guys, if you have time, help me fix this essay I've just done. Thank you!

The difficult part of IELTS writing test is that the topic is not predictable. In order to be successful in this test, you must be able to talk about something that you didn't prepare to.

The essay above is very good in content, well-prepared, provides sufficient information, but it doesn't mean that you will perform close to that level in the actual IELTS test.

In order to simulate the real testing condition, you should only write with whatever you have in mind and within the restricted time frame. I don't think 404 words is a reasonable target for the test.

You didn't make much obvious error in the essay, however you may want to consider replacing some of the phrases to make it more natural:

It is obvious that our planet is protected and supported by every trees all over the world.

With the recent uncontrolled forest exploiting, some people think that this possibly leads to the end of the earth.

what does "this" stand for? If you think it stands for "the recent uncontrolled forest exploiting" then you are wrong.

In my point of view in this essay, if people keep destroying this green natural resource, they will soon face many serious consequences such as global warming, disaster, or even extinction.

Why is it only in this essay? And why is it only "them" who will face the consequences? Will you face the consequences as well?

Firstly, it's knowledgeable that people now have to suffer the climate change resulting from greenhouse effect caused by carbon dioxide.

Very fragmented sentence. You need to rewrite it in a better form.

Generally, carbon dioxide is absorbed by trees, which prevents the greenhouse effect.

What does "which" stand for?

However, the number of these filter machines are decreasing continually, leaving many troubles in which there is global warming.

Should be "is" instead. You should not repeat "global warming" as you've already mentioned it above.

This will partly modify the climate such as warmer temperature, wind direction change or higher sea level.

What does "this" stand for? Since you said "will modify the climate such as", the 3 examples behind that should be verb phrases instead of noun phrases.

Besides, a lot of carbon dioxide may pollute the environment seriously, which will harms the global health.

We are talking about "the" environment that we are living in.

Furthermore, destruction of the world's forest will facilitate many types of disaster like flood, drought, tidal waves and so forth.

tidal waves are not caused by forest destruction, aren't they?

People all know that trees protect them from flood by holding a large amount of water, and from drought by maintaining the humidity of the world. However, it seems like these efficient shield is being destroyed by ourselves.

replaced & added some words...

According to many scientists, in this century, people have to suffer a lot of disasters, proved by the Tsunami in Thailand, or by the earthquakes in Haiti and Japan.

"According to the scientists, we will suffer many disasters in this century. And that was proven by the ....". Do not try to make your sentence too complicated to understand. It would also be better if you include yourself into the so call "people" by using "we" and "us".

Eventually, the unavoidable results are poverty, starvation, losing home and deaths, which affects seriously the human lives.

It's not "eventually", it is "at the end". The last part is meaningless though.

Equally important, not only is the human affected but the animals are also related firmly to the trees in global ecology system.

Well, this part alone can take away all your scores for the test.

If the forests disappear, there is an enormous amount of animals having to witness the condition of no habitation and the deficiency of food, inevitably.

I can assure you that 99.99% of walking creatures on this planet will die before the last piece of forest disappear.

Moreover, some species which are at high risk of extinction could never be seen on this earth again once they disappear due to the speedy destruction. In some recent researches, the ecologists find that at present, the probability of extinction for each species is higher than ever. This is a warning bell for the governments to make proper policy to protect animals from human threatening activities.

Good points, but not related to the topic.

To summarize, although it's undeniable that exploiting natural resources helps developing/to develop the world, we need to look back to see whether what we've lost is worthy. We have to control our actions to improve the earth as well as our lives.

"Improve the Earth"... Oh my goodness.

[anhtu214]

Originally Posted by Jay

The difficult part of IELTS writing test is that the topic is not predictable. In order to be successful in this test, you must be able to talk about something that you didn't prepare to.

The essay above is very good in content, well-prepared, provides sufficient information, but it doesn't mean that you will perform close to that level in the actual IELTS test.

In order to simulate the real testing condition, you should only write with whatever you have in mind and within the restricted time frame. I don't think 404 words is a reasonable target for the test.

I really appreciate the experience which you share with me. Honestly, I don't write much, so my essay is that bad! I'm trying to fix it out.

Anyway, thank you so much

PS: If you have time, would you mind checking some of my essay? I really need someone experienced like you.

[aclong154]

Originally Posted by aclong154

Giúp những ai cần giúp đỡ

P/s: cho em hỏi bài kiểm tra SLEP gì gì đó có quan trọng ko với điểm bao nhiêu thuộc dạng cao vì hồi chiều em thi thấy dễ quá đạt 62/67

Help me anybody

[wall[e]]

nhân dịp giỗ tổ vua Hùng
on the occasion of Annivesary of Death's Hung Kings, isn't it?

[Jay]

Originally Posted by wall[e]

nhân dịp giỗ tổ vua Hùng
on the occasion of Annivesary of Death's Hung Kings, isn't it?

no it's not right.

To celebrate the King Hung's death

[chiphu]

On the Death Anniversary Day of the Hung Kings, to be exact.

You may also say: "To commemorate the Hung Kings,..."

[bug_bunny145]

Originally Posted by Jay

no it's not right.

To celebrate the King Hung's death

you have helped the gay above so much i hope that someday, if i have some essays, you will fix it for me

[gamer941]

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